This is my narrative poem (or atleast all that i can remember without my book).
Into a family Trent was born,
But only 3 legs had he.
His family had 5 legs more,
They were octopuses you see.
He was teased and hurt by many others,
'Specially a fish called puff.
But he could trust was his 8-legged mother,
Although all else was rough.
(And thats all i can remember for now, i will put more on tomorrow when i bring the book home.)
StUfF aBoUt Me
- Individualist
- land of the lollipops, candyland, New Zealand
- I don't know much about computers. As I said I love basketball, I have two little brothers, a dog, a cat and a fish pond (with fish in it). I'd also like to tell you that my profile photo is a cat with golden teeth.
13 comments:
Thats brillant!
I sugest that you use words where your numbers are to amke it eaier to read, also I recomend Word Verification!
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I really hope you'll remember to put the rest up!
Although, it's quite good so far!
mirp:P
P.S. remem ber to visit our class wiki!
marvellous poem! keep it going for sure !
hello, im nicer than kittykat & ezylrb, i give you a A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ told you i was nicer than the others!
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why wont this go longer, ill try this-
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thats cool how do you change what your comment thing says
I was wandering about that as well
i love it!! do not forget to put the rest up please!! that is really really cool!!!!!!!!!!!
very interesting
not....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you can trust him, he's only a pain
no offense, but it has been a very long time since you put the rest up!!!
tomorrow was a very long time ago!!
i know that heaps of people want to know what happens next.
pim:P
p.s.
do you know about daemons?
check kittykats's blog to find out.
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